I like to write - I like to write small
Mascara tracks weave websAcross her porcelain skinDriving rain beats downOnto her smiling face
The bustle of the worldIs mutedAs she feels a kissFrom each raindrop lover
Painted a great picture with your words, love how all just stops and she just takes it in.
the raindrop lovers are worth that the mascara gets ruined...i gladly give in to them...smiles...happy rain day!
ah love the raindrop lovers line...and if the mascara was running before the shower i hope it sooths her...
Very strong visuals here, Like this esp -Mascara tracks weave websAcross her porcelain skin
Oh, I love those last two lines...great imagery here, made we wish to be standing out there in the rain.
Thanks all for your lovely comments :-) ..this is the first time I've really shared my efforts at writing so the nice comments are so lovely to read! ..wish I could figure Blogger out a little more though, I'm finding it difficult!